
Tell the earth-thieves
To plant no more orchards of death
Beneath this star of ours
Or the fruit will eat them up.
The preceding lines from Vasko Popa’s Note on the Terazije Gallows, 1941 are just a fragment of the “pretty, striking words” you will come across in Nadeem Aslam’s ambitious third novel The Wasted Vigil. Aslam is a gifted author who pens down his story in a perfect rhythm; every pause, drift and emotion is measured. It really appears too perfect at times one would say. Nonetheless it is not Aslam’s penmanship, rather his resorting to stereotypical images that both annoyed and disturbed me.
The Wasted Vigil is certainly not an easy book. You can’t take it up and put it down during a dentist’s appointment. It is rather brutal in its exploration of Afghanistan; the past, present and the future.
The setting is an unsettling Afghanistan ravaged by world forces; the Soviets, Talibaan and now the United States. Marcus Caldwell is an English widower, owner of an old perfume factory who has lost his family in the war torn Afghanistan. The perfume factory serves as an asylum throughout the novel’s narrative. There is the Russian widow Lara, on a quest to find her missing conscripted brother. David, an ex- CIA operative. Casa, the stereotypical young jihaadi, who only seems to spew hatred. And Dunia, Aslam’s definition of a “moderate Muslim”. All of these characters are linked together by the war motif.
My objection towards The Wasted Vigil stems from the fact that in an age where every misdemeanour is attributed to the Muslims we hardly need a Pakistani writer to come up and point more accusatory fingers. It is always good to understand the point of view of both sides and yes there are many issues on which we need to correct ourselves. However what I felt lacking in this book was the development of the “moderate Muslim” whereas the jihaadi’s ideas were given more space. Coupled with this were the frequent misquotations from the Quran, taken out of context and employed as the jihaadi’s wrongful justifications.
The Wasted Vigil is a novel of great ambition no doubt, a misguided ambition.

